(Click here for Part 4 of Pinch Hitter)
I sit in my Ram 2500 Mega Cab parked a few blocks down the street from my mark, Herman’s grandson, Eddie Snead. Even his name suggests that he’s a weasel. Skinny little, long-haired shit. Although, aside from some probation time for petty theft, his record was fairly clean. No history of violence whatsoever.
However, there’s always a first time for everything. The first time for the act. The first time getting caught.
The first time the Grim Reaper, played convincingly by Kenny Black, comes to pay you a little visit.
But one thing I realized from my visit with ol’ man Herman is that I took him too lightly. The vigilante business can be rough on the body and spirit, and when Kaybee found the human bone in Herman’s garden, I was in the middle of a several month sabbatical to get my shit together. Only problem with that having that much time away is ya get a bit rusty, a bit out of practice.
With Herman, I wasn’t cautious—just ran into his place with guns a blazing, so to speak. If he turned out to be the man I’d suspected him to be, Kenny Black may’ve been pushing daisies from a shallow grave.
Learning from my overzealous mistake, I’m taking my time with Eddie Snead. I’ve been watching him for five days and nights straight. Armed with my zoom binoculars, I can easily observe the drug transactions he’s making outside the public basketball courts.
He’s out there all damn day from mid-morning until dusk. His clients range from about 14 years old to the late twenties. Maybe a few thirty-somethings here and there.
He works alone. Drives a pale blue Buick Regal to and from the basketball court parking lot and alternates between the bleachers and the street corner. In his shack of a brick house—containing a garden in the back just like his grandfather’s—he seems to live alone. No piece of trim coming for a quickie. No cars aside from his Regal parked in the driveway. No one coming or going throughout the night, so it seems he keeps his business away from his home. Smart.
If I had to guess, I’d say he probably grows his own weed and has made a good reputation for his product and as a local small town dealer. So why the dead body? Was there another local dealer that invaded his turf, or vice-versa?
I think in the dead of night, while little Eddie is fast asleep, will be the best time to learn the answers to those questions. Yes, I’ve given this enough time and thought.
Tonight, Kenny Black strikes.
April 1st, 2012 at 11:04 am
More, more more! I love the suspense!
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April 2nd, 2012 at 8:06 am
More will be coming! In two weeks!! 🙂
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April 2nd, 2012 at 8:08 am
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Part 5 of my Kenny Black serial, Pinch Hitter.
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April 2nd, 2012 at 9:41 am
You definately need to write a little faster Jay!! Love this so far and yearn for more!! Keep up the great story.
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April 2nd, 2012 at 10:00 am
Thank you–glad you’re enjoying! Unfortunately, I’m only scheduled to post every two weeks, so please tune-in in two weeks for the next installment! 🙂
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April 3rd, 2012 at 9:39 pm
Wow – LOVING IT!!! Waiting for the next installment….
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April 4th, 2012 at 8:27 am
Thank you, Nancy Girl!!! 🙂
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April 15th, 2012 at 12:14 pm
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